السلام عليكم كتبت esaay واريد تصليح لكتابتي وماهي...

السلام عليكم كتبت esaay واريد تصليح لكتابتي وماهي الأخطاء وعلى ماذا اركز ؟! اتمنى خلال اليوم مساعدتي لأن غدا امتحاني WRITING TASK Some students like to use a laptop for their studies, while others prefer to use books and paper. Which do you think is better? Discuss both sides and give your opinion. You have 40 minutes to complete this task. Write at least 200 words. It is often argued that study become significant, and people are educated and the society development faster. In my opinion, completely agree with study by printed books, but some people disagree. In this easy, I will look at both sides and give many reasons for my opinion. I believe that study through books better than study by laptop. My first reason is that I can control a book. For example, I can write my note everywhere I want and move to another pages easily and open my book anytime with out charge or take some time until it opens like laptop. Secondly, it is possible to take the book any places. This means that, some time my family decided go to trip and I have exam I can take my book with me and study there also, weight the book lees than laptop. My third reason is that laptop light effect on the eyes. As a result, some time when I study a lot of hours my eyes feel hot then drop some tears causes the heir light. However, many of learner prefer study by laptop. First, the student enjoy when study by their laptop. For example, the learner they see the laptop better than book because it is contain every thing they do not need to take pin or not and so on the laptop it contains everything. Secondly, nowadays the study by laptop make easy. This means that, nearly all the studying transformed to electronic, and the some teachers give their pupils the exams by laptop. Finally, they can find any information faster. As a result, they can open more than one browser the same time and the search about any things. In conclusion, I strongly believe study by the books best than laptop. When learner are study by books, they can focused.d